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I>did not do well for chinese exam>felt depressed and hopeless>friends and family encouraged me>suggested ways for me to improve> i tried it and worked very hard for a few months> scored the highest in a chinese class> everyone was proud of me including myself. Coda: you can never defeat those whom never give up.
Me>Sports Day>My class andI wereon the way to the stadium>everyone was noisy>my turn to run>my friend,Tom, tripped me>I fell down>another friend helped me >I got up>did not give up>finished race>happy to have completed race> Coda:If we do not give up, anything is possible
me>failed SA1 exam>ever since that day i worked hard everyday>at the exam day, during exam, i found out all the questions are easy>in the end, i got A* for all subjects and first in class
Name: Haidah Fikriyah Theme: challenge Me>sports day>always slowest in class>nervous>get ready to run>remembered mother's advice of pretending that there was a lion after so that I would run faster than usual>followed advice>currently in second position>tried my best>shot off to the finishing line>won first place>proud of myself. Moral: Never say never before trying
Mum wake me up>School holidays>Sports Day>Got to the stadium>found a seat with my classmates>announcer asked student participating in the 1x100m relay to step forward>got out of my seat>went to the running track>started running>about to reach the finishing line>vision tunnelled>fell onto the ground>paramedics lifted me on a stretcher>carried me to the first aid tent>gave me pain killers>next moment in the hospital>parents next to me looking worried>doctor said I had a torn hamstring>had to walk with clutches>discharged after 5 days>difficulty doing things such as playing soccer with my friends>challenged myself to walk without the help of clutches>persevered>could walk normally>proud of myself>learnt that diligence and perseverance are not only the values to overcome our challenges>it is the effort that we put in that counts! :D
Melden, i think that you are moving out of point. First you talk about sports day and the next you talk about being proud of yourself because you can walk?
Melden, your narrative plan is creative and I really like your coda. I just think that you actually do not need to include the sports day part since your challenge was on overcoming the pain in your leg and challenging yourself.
Melden, I don't think it is possible to walk with a torn hamstring without a support and you are moving out of point when you said that you was dicharged after 5 day!(After all, it is a torn hamstring... how can you be discharged so fast)
I>slowest runner in class>everyone always teased me>teacher told everyone that sports day was coming in three weeks>everyone have to participate>teacher came to encourage me>I felt distressed>after school went home>saw a group of boys playing catching downstairs>remembered about sports day>thought about it>decided to do it as I was sick and tired of being teased of being the slowest> trained hard everyday>the day finally came>I was running a relay and was the last person running>race started>team was doing well>baton was passed to me> I suddenly tripped and fell down>I did not give and picked myself up>I ran as fast as i could and won the race>I was proud of myself>Coda:Never give up. Always pick yourself up when you fall.Give your best in everything you do.
Me->at sports day->always beaten at 100 m dash by Tommy->everytime I was beatenalways wanted to stop->coach kept telling me to not quit and train hard->this time,tired of being the underdog->this I swear i would beat him->in order to accomplish this->trained hard everyday->when it was raining went to gym->by the next sports day felt good enough to beat Tommy->race started->at first i was behind Tommy->but slowly i started being closer and closer to him->nearing the finish line I gave it all i could->i beat Tommy! Coda A quitter never wins,a winner never quits.
Jane->always fails her test-> Mary-> always gets A distinction->Mary kept criticizing Jane-> Jane was tired of Mary's criticizes-> Jane decided to buck up-> One day, Jane fought back to Mary-> Jane criticized Mary back-> became enemies-> Jane studied a lot, day till night-> Mary was still boasting-> Mary did not study hard anymore-> It was Sa2-> June realised the paper was very difficult but managed to finish it-> Mary also realised the difficulty of the paper and did not finish it -> got results -> June got A -> Mary got F minus-> Mary apologised to June-> June apologised-> They became friends again->Coda-> Be humble and study hard
I->at the sports stadium->My turn to run for my event->while i was running,my legs turned like jelly and i fell->remembered what my mother had told me when i felt like giving up->plucked up my courage, stood up and dashed forward->before i knew it, i was at the finishing line and i was first->the crowd cheered for me and i was proud of myself->coda:never give up
I>good at relays> sports day is coming >PE teacher choose me in the 2 X 50 M relay >i was elated > I found out from my PE teacher that fastest runner in the school took part in 2 events > he took part in the 200M race and the 2 X 50 M relay > HE WAS MY OPPONENT > I trained doubly hard as him >on the actual day my whole class cheered for me > during the relay , my team mate let go of the baton before I took it >I grabbed it just in the nick of time before it touched the track >it delayed the class position > I tripled my speed to catch up with the rest > I over took the other classes except the fastest runner's class > I tripled my speed again and over took him > I won the event >coda : never give up
James ~ just got her driving license ~ bought a new car ~ wants to show off the new car to her friends ~ got her friends out ~ started driving the car ~ friends boarded the car ~ started chatting ~ distracted ~ kept looking behind ~ oncoming car at the U-turn point crashed into his car ~ bonnet of the car was smashed flat ~ had a slight injury ~ friends were unhurt ~ Coda: Never talk while u drive
Jake~affected by his parents fighting~driving alone to get some fresh air~thinking about what his parents will do~stressed~drank alcohol~drunk~colided with an on coming car~got into the hospital~ Coda:Never drink while driving
Joanne, like alicia, your narrative plan was creative but i think you were supposed to write about a challenge, not an accident. The example given by miss priya was just to let you know how to do it.
I>do not have confidence in myself>do not know that I myself is actually good at relay races>but my coach know that and so he choose me to be the representative for our house, green house, for the 2 by 200m race in the sports day event>I do not want to be the one representing but after my mother and my coach's encouragement I finally agreed>For that I train very hard as I do not want to let my mother and coach feel disappointed>*>Sports day has arrived!>I felt a surge of warmth when throughout the race and I ran even faster>got in first!!!>when I stand on the podium I beamed with pride and when the photographer stood in front of us to tke a picture, I smiled with my sweetest smile>that was captured into my best memory.
Ethan ->He was very lonely and wanted attention->He decided to join an infamous gang->Ethan begged the gang leader,the notorious bully, James,for a place->He was unimpressed->So James challenged him to steal money from the blind busker ->Ethan was not caught stealing and got a place in the gang->Although he got a place in the in the gang, he was overcome by guilty-> So he mustered up all his courage and turned himself in->He was reprimanded and had to go through counselling ->The money was returned to the blind busker-> The busker and ethan became friends-> Ethan was never lonely again->Coda:Always tell the truth,although it's challenge.
Name:Tan Yi Qian Theme:Accident John->passed his mid-year exams->felt excited to tell his mother about his result ->happily carrying his bag home from school ->went passed a traffic light->being impatient,John dashed acrossed the road->an incoming car was speeding and the driver did not see John walking acrossed the road->when the driver saw John, it was too late for the driver to brake->John stood rooted to the ground and did not know what to do->the driver turned left and right trying not to crashed into John->in the end, the car crashed into the pavement->John was not injured,but the driver was badly injured and was sent to the hospital for treatment->the police took John statement->John felt sorry for the driver as if he did not dashed acrossed the road, none of this would happened->Coda:never dash across the road even if there is no car around,and be patient.
Name: Bernice Ang Theme: Accident Joanne->passed her exams with flying colours->felt ecstatic->kept looking at her paper while going home->did not notice the red man->went pass the traffic light->incoming car hit Joanne->Accident Coda: When you are about to cross the road, be sure to check the traffic lights and incoming cars.
jake->went to the park to take a break from homework -> Took a stroll to the park ->On the way saw his friend -> realised that his friend was also going to the park ->decided to walk together -> were too engrossed in their conversation ->did not realise traffic light was red(both thought it was green) ->accident coda->Always be aware of your surroundings
Name: Ya xuan Them:Challenge Me->in the classroom listening to the teacher's announcements->maths test next week->I was overcome with dread -> no choice but to study.->once home,every day did revision and took down notes at school, studying dilligently->day of test arrived.->all was unti one question.->tried best to answer.-> handed paper in.->kept worrying about marks->found out that I had passed! coda->anything is possible if you try your best. Ya xuan
Theme:Challenge Me~Always getting bullied in school~To worried to tell teachers or parents as I am afraid the bully will seek revenge~I would always come home in a bad mood~one day mum asked why am i always so worried or sad~I overcame my fear of the bully and t9ld my mum the situation~My mum immedeatly informs my teacher on the bully situation~the teacher has a meeting with the bullies parents~in the end the teachers were always looking out for me and i was neclver bullied again~Coda:never be afraid to talk about you're problems.
Name: Crystal Theme: challenge Me-Jannete-she challenge me to be faster than her in the sports meet a month later-I accepted the challenge-went home and trained hard-everytime I have spare time I would train-time has arrived-I was confident to beat Jannete-Jannete was boasting to her friends at the stadium-we were the first event-starter gun sounded-I ran with all my might-left Jannete staring at me in shock and horror-the sight was priceless-moment of glory did not last-tripped over a stone-extended my legs to intercept-wrong move-felt a searing pain growing at my knee-I stumbled and fell-Jannete smirked smugly-catching up to me-I did not want to embarrass yself-continued crawling to the finish line-crowd of spectators were silent-I limped clumsily and made it-a standing ovation given to me-Jannete was staring in shock, terror and awe coda: Perservere to achieve your goal
Name: Yen Shyuan Theme: Challenge Got home from soccer practice--->Mike, my friend called and invited me to his house--->Got to his house and MIke challenge me to climb the apple tree in his backyard--->did not want to be a coward but scared of heights--->accepted the challenge--->climb halfway accidentally slipped and fell--->twisted his leg--->sent to hospital--->leg in a plaster--->had to use cruntches for 6 months--->cannot play soccer for at least 6 months--->felt that it was the biggest challenge in his life--->had to miss the soccer match held next month--->leg slowly healed over time--->could take out plaster--->can walk after a few weeks after plaster was taken out--->coda:Any thing can be overcomed, even if you think it is the biggest challenge ever
Toby>Excited to try out new car as he just got his linecence>So excited that he did not see the red traffic light>Accidentally hit a pedestrian walking across road>Hesitated but eventually called 999 and 991>Police and ambulance came>Lost linecense>Coda:be careful
Toby>Excited to try out new car as he just got his license>So excited that he did not see the red traffic light>Accidentally hit a pedestrian walking across road>Hesitated but eventually called 999 and 991>Police and ambulance came>Lost license>Coda:be careful
I>did not do well for chinese exam>felt depressed and hopeless>friends and family encouraged me>suggested ways for me to improve> i tried it and worked very hard for a few months> scored the highest in a chinese class> everyone was proud of me including myself.
ReplyDeleteCoda: you can never defeat those whom never give up.
What were the ways for you to improve your family and friends suggested?
DeleteThey told me to read more chinese books, memorise chinese phrases, read compositions out aloud to them and studied and revised chinese with them.
Deletedid you score the highest in a chinese exam or in a test or what?
DeleteI scored the highest in a chinese examination paper.
DeleteMe>Sports Day>My class andI wereon the way to the stadium>everyone was noisy>my turn to run>my friend,Tom, tripped me>I fell down>another friend helped me >I got up>did not give up>finished race>happy to have completed race> Coda:If we do not give up, anything is possible
ReplyDeleteDid you win? Why did tom trip you
ReplyDelete(Miss priya, the timings of the times we send the comments are haywire...)
ReplyDeleteme>failed SA1 exam>ever since that day i worked hard everyday>at the exam day, during exam, i found out all the questions are easy>in the end, i got A* for all subjects and first in class
ReplyDeleteCoda: Never give up and you would have a reward.
DeleteName: Haidah Fikriyah
ReplyDeleteTheme: challenge
Me>sports day>always slowest in class>nervous>get ready to run>remembered mother's advice of pretending that there was a lion after so that I would run faster than usual>followed advice>currently in second position>tried my best>shot off to the finishing line>won first place>proud of myself. Moral: Never say never before trying
I think that you should elaborate more as some parts i did not really understand.
DeleteI think that the last part should be a coda and not a moral. But good effort !
DeleteMum wake me up>School holidays>Sports Day>Got to the stadium>found a seat with my classmates>announcer asked student participating in the 1x100m relay to step forward>got out of my seat>went to the running track>started running>about to reach the finishing line>vision tunnelled>fell onto the ground>paramedics lifted me on a stretcher>carried me to the first aid tent>gave me pain killers>next moment in the hospital>parents next to me looking worried>doctor said I had a torn hamstring>had to walk with clutches>discharged after 5 days>difficulty doing things such as playing soccer with my friends>challenged myself to walk without the help of clutches>persevered>could walk normally>proud of myself>learnt that diligence and perseverance are not only the values to overcome our challenges>it is the effort that we put in that counts! :D
ReplyDeleteMelden, i think that you are moving out of point. First you talk about sports day and the next you talk about being proud of yourself because you can walk?
DeleteMelden, your narrative plan is creative and I really like your coda. I just think that you actually do not need to include the sports day part since your challenge was on overcoming the pain in your leg and challenging yourself.
DeleteI don't understand why you were proud of yourself because you could walk?
DeleteI do not get how you were at home and the next place you were at the stadium
DeleteWhy is there sports day in the middle of school holiday?
DeleteCould you elaborate on the strenous exercise you did that caused your hamstring to be broken
DeleteMelden, I don't think it is possible to walk with a torn hamstring without a support and you are moving out of point when you said that you was dicharged after 5 day!(After all, it is a torn hamstring... how can you be discharged so fast)
DeleteTo Jing Jing: What did character do after finding out that all the questions were easy?
ReplyDeleteWhat motivated you to try harder?
I>slowest runner in class>everyone always teased me>teacher told everyone that sports day was coming in three weeks>everyone have to participate>teacher came to encourage me>I felt distressed>after school went home>saw a group of boys playing catching downstairs>remembered about sports day>thought about it>decided to do it as I was sick and tired of being teased of being the slowest> trained hard everyday>the day finally came>I was running a relay and was the last person running>race started>team was doing well>baton was passed to me> I suddenly tripped and fell down>I did not give and picked myself up>I ran as fast as i could and won the race>I was proud of myself>Coda:Never give up. Always pick yourself up when you fall.Give your best in everything you do.
ReplyDeleteWen Xuan
When you fell what happened to the baton?
DeleteWhy do people tease u?
DeleteWhat did u trip over?
DeleteTo Haidah: If you were the slowest in class, why were you running the race?
ReplyDeleteWen Xuan
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ReplyDeleteMe->at sports day->always beaten at 100 m dash by Tommy->everytime I was beatenalways wanted to stop->coach kept telling me to not quit and train hard->this time,tired of being the underdog->this I swear i would beat him->in order to accomplish this->trained hard everyday->when it was raining went to gym->by the next sports day felt good enough to beat Tommy->race started->at first i was behind Tommy->but slowly i started being closer and closer to him->nearing the finish line I gave it all i could->i beat Tommy!
ReplyDeleteCoda
A quitter never wins,a winner never quits.
If you practised exerting the whole day, then what about study timings?
DeleteThat is a good coda, Elrond, but there is a common sense error. Why do you go to the gym when it is raining?
DeleteSorry, I wrote exerting instead of exercising
DeleteName: Charmaine Lim
ReplyDeleteTheme: Challenge
Jane->always fails her test-> Mary-> always gets A distinction->Mary kept criticizing Jane-> Jane was tired of Mary's criticizes-> Jane decided to buck up-> One day, Jane fought back to Mary-> Jane criticized Mary back-> became enemies-> Jane studied a lot, day till night-> Mary was still boasting-> Mary did not study hard anymore-> It was Sa2-> June realised the paper was very difficult but managed to finish it-> Mary also realised the difficulty of the paper and did not finish it -> got results -> June got A -> Mary got F minus-> Mary apologised to June-> June apologised-> They became friends again->Coda-> Be humble and study hard
who is 'June ' how come it appeared suddenly ?
DeleteSorry, it's supposed to be jane.
DeleteMary did not study anymore because she boasted?
DeleteShe was too proud of herself she spent little time studying
DeleteI->at the sports stadium->My turn to run for my event->while i was running,my legs turned like jelly and i fell->remembered what my mother had told me when i felt like giving up->plucked up my courage, stood up and dashed forward->before i knew it, i was at the finishing line and i was first->the crowd cheered for me and i was proud of myself->coda:never give up
ReplyDeleteWhy did your legs turned into jelly ?
DeleteI>good at relays> sports day is coming >PE teacher choose me in the 2 X 50 M relay >i was elated > I found out from my PE teacher that fastest runner in the school took part in 2 events > he took part in the 200M race and the 2 X 50 M relay > HE WAS MY OPPONENT > I trained doubly hard as him >on the actual day my whole class cheered for me > during the relay , my team mate let go of the baton before I took it >I grabbed it just in the nick of time before it touched the track >it delayed the class position > I tripled my speed to catch up with the rest > I over took the other classes except the fastest runner's class > I tripled my speed again and over took him > I won the event >coda : never give up
ReplyDeleteName: Alicia Cheng
ReplyDeleteTheme: Accident
James ~ just got her driving license ~ bought a new car ~ wants to show off the new car to her friends ~ got her friends out ~ started driving the car ~ friends boarded the car ~ started chatting ~ distracted ~ kept looking behind ~ oncoming car at the U-turn point crashed into his car ~ bonnet of the car was smashed flat ~ had a slight injury ~ friends were unhurt ~ Coda: Never talk while u drive
Which part did it say James talked to his friends?it only says James keeps looking back so i feel that the coda has a problem
DeleteAlicia, your narrative plan is creative, but the homework was to create a narrative plan about a challenge, not an accident...
DeleteName:Joanne
ReplyDeleteTheme:Accident
Jake~affected by his parents fighting~driving alone to get some fresh air~thinking about what his parents will do~stressed~drank alcohol~drunk~colided with an on coming car~got into the hospital~
Coda:Never drink while driving
Joanne, I think you should add in Jake bought a drink and drove
DeleteJoanne, like alicia, your narrative plan was creative but i think you were supposed to write about a challenge, not an accident. The example given by miss priya was just to let you know how to do it.
ReplyDeleteI>do not have confidence in myself>do not know that I myself is actually good at relay races>but my coach know that and so he choose me to be the representative for our house, green house, for the 2 by 200m race in the sports day event>I do not want to be the one representing but after my mother and my coach's encouragement I finally agreed>For that I train very hard as I do not want to let my mother and coach feel disappointed>*>Sports day has arrived!>I felt a surge of warmth when throughout the race and I ran even faster>got in first!!!>when I stand on the podium I beamed with pride and when the photographer stood in front of us to tke a picture, I smiled with my sweetest smile>that was captured into my best memory.
ReplyDeletemy coda: have confidence in everything you do, for that will help you to discover your abilities.
ReplyDeleteLiang pin, how did the coach know that you are good at relay races?
DeleteName:Asher
ReplyDeleteTheme:Challenge
Ethan ->He was very lonely and wanted attention->He decided to join an infamous gang->Ethan begged the gang leader,the notorious bully, James,for a place->He was unimpressed->So James challenged him to steal money from the blind busker ->Ethan was not caught stealing and got a place in the gang->Although he got a place in the in the gang, he was overcome by guilty-> So he mustered up all his courage and turned himself in->He was reprimanded and had to go through counselling ->The money was returned to the blind busker-> The busker and ethan became friends-> Ethan was never lonely again->Coda:Always tell the truth,although it's challenge.
Why was he lonely?
DeleteName:Tan Yi Qian
ReplyDeleteTheme:Accident
John->passed his mid-year exams->felt excited to tell his mother about his result ->happily carrying his bag home from school
->went passed a traffic light->being impatient,John dashed acrossed the road->an incoming car was speeding and the driver did not see John walking acrossed the road->when the driver saw John, it was too late for the driver to brake->John stood rooted to the ground and did not know what to do->the driver turned left and right trying not to crashed into John->in the end, the car crashed into the pavement->John was not injured,but the driver was badly injured and was sent to the hospital for treatment->the police took John statement->John felt sorry for the driver as if he did not dashed acrossed the road, none of this would happened->Coda:never dash across the road even if there is no car around,and be patient.
Name: Bernice Ang
ReplyDeleteTheme: Accident
Joanne->passed her exams with flying colours->felt ecstatic->kept looking at her paper while going home->did not notice the red man->went pass the traffic light->incoming car hit Joanne->Accident
Coda: When you are about to cross the road, be sure to check the traffic lights and incoming cars.
jake->went to the park to take a break from homework -> Took a stroll to the park ->On the way saw his friend -> realised that his friend was also going to the park ->decided to walk together -> were too engrossed in their conversation ->did not realise traffic light was red(both thought it was green) ->accident
ReplyDeletecoda->Always be aware of your surroundings
Name: Ya xuan
ReplyDeleteThem:Challenge
Me->in the classroom listening to the teacher's announcements->maths test next week->I was overcome with dread -> no choice but to study.->once home,every day did revision and took down notes at school, studying dilligently->day of test arrived.->all was unti one question.->tried best to answer.-> handed paper in.->kept worrying about marks->found out that I had passed!
coda->anything is possible if you try your best.
Ya xuan
The part " over come with dread" why were you overcame with dread?
DeleteTheme:Challenge
ReplyDeleteMe~Always getting bullied in school~To worried to tell teachers or parents as I am afraid the bully will seek revenge~I would
always come home in a bad mood~one day mum asked why am i always so worried or sad~I overcame my fear of the bully and t9ld my mum the situation~My mum immedeatly informs my teacher on the bully situation~the teacher has a meeting with the bullies parents~in the end the teachers were always looking out for me and i was neclver bullied again~Coda:never be afraid to talk about you're problems.
Jet, how does getting bullied relate to challenge?
ReplyDeleteName: Crystal
ReplyDeleteTheme: challenge
Me-Jannete-she challenge me to be faster than her in the sports meet a month later-I accepted the challenge-went home and trained hard-everytime I have spare time I would train-time has arrived-I was confident to beat Jannete-Jannete was boasting to her friends at the stadium-we were the first event-starter gun sounded-I ran with all my might-left Jannete staring at me in shock and horror-the sight was priceless-moment of glory did not last-tripped over a stone-extended my legs to intercept-wrong move-felt a searing pain growing at my knee-I stumbled and fell-Jannete smirked smugly-catching up to me-I did not want to embarrass yself-continued crawling to the finish line-crowd of spectators were silent-I limped clumsily and made it-a standing ovation given to me-Jannete was staring in shock, terror and awe
coda: Perservere to achieve your goal
Name: Yen Shyuan
ReplyDeleteTheme: Challenge
Got home from soccer practice--->Mike, my friend called and invited me to his house--->Got to his house and MIke challenge me to climb the apple tree in his backyard--->did not want to be a coward but scared of heights--->accepted the challenge--->climb halfway accidentally slipped and fell--->twisted his leg--->sent to hospital--->leg in a plaster--->had to use cruntches for 6 months--->cannot play soccer for at least 6 months--->felt that it was the biggest challenge in his life--->had to miss the soccer match held next month--->leg slowly healed over time--->could take out plaster--->can walk after a few weeks after plaster was taken out--->coda:Any thing can be overcomed, even if you think it is the biggest challenge ever
To Yen Shyuan, why did Mike want to challenge you?
ReplyDeleteWen Xuan
Toby>Excited to try out new car as he just got his linecence>So excited that he did not see the red traffic light>Accidentally hit a pedestrian walking across road>Hesitated but eventually called 999 and 991>Police and ambulance came>Lost linecense>Coda:be careful
ReplyDeleteCorrected with Name and misspelling
DeleteName: Gabriel Jereza
Theme: Accident
Toby>Excited to try out new car as he just got his license>So excited that he did not see the red traffic light>Accidentally hit a pedestrian walking across road>Hesitated but eventually called 999 and 991>Police and ambulance came>Lost license>Coda:be careful